SireForseti's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Stone ocean beach day episode]

really nice posing and nice background i like some of the smaller details there.
the faces looks a bit off, mostly Jolyne's face (I think that it's because of the angle of the head not syncing up with the face.) and I think that the anatomy could use a bit of work.
I'm not too fan of the faces in terms of style but it's more of a personal thing.
Keep it up you can do it !

[Lain]

It's mad stylized, it's nice, the filtering is definitely overkill in my opinion.

[Mamimi]

reeks of 2000s (positive)

[HERE IS MY STAND, SNOOPY!!!!!]

Shonen spirit Charlie Brown is an extremely unusual concept and i'm all for it.
You should use another layer / use a brush for coloring cause only using the bucket leaves some clear white spots and it kinda makes it less polished

BLOOKYMASTER responds:

Thank you for the comment! I drew it on Paint with a mouse so I was kinda limited but I think I will redo the drawing on a software like Krita. Anyway I'm happy that you liked it!

[Yenno Endo and Kimidori]

This fucks, I love the sonic riders type shading, Yenno's pose is a bit stiff compared to Kimidori's stance but holy fuck man.

[Marvel vs Capcom 2]

I have no fucking idea how you managed to texture your art enough to make it look like the MVC2 official art, and i'm fucking jealous. 10/10 geniuenly feels like official mvc2 stuff

[Bulma Fanart]

nice rendering by the face is a bit scuffed (the place where the root of the nose links to the periorbital region looks really weird, I think that it has to do with the shading of that part.)
get references and try to simplify the face a little bit to make it less weird.

[Guts Fanart]

Not too bad ! It's rather sketchy / messy in terms of linework (especially the sword), but the potential is there, the upper right arm is way shorter than it should be, and the posing feels a bit stiff, feel free to check out references to improve with your stuff.
Keep it up !

[American McGee's Alice fanart]

Really really really good ! The face could use some work as it's pretty hard to differentiate it's features outside of the eyes. , the posing is ultra nice, same with the background.
You really stuck the landing with the lineless art. It kinda reminds me of a cult classifc 2000s flash tv show or something.

GoofballPaul responds:

Thank you! I'm very happy to hear that! ^0^
Now you mention it, yeah, the face is rather weak as well, compared to the rest... Thank you for the feedback! :D

[Serenity Illusion Form]

Nice line, not too fan of the rendering, it's way too mushy / soft, in my opinion, other than that and some anatomy stuff (that weird spike on where the waist and the abs joins together) it's pretty good.