SireForseti's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bulma Fanart]

nice rendering by the face is a bit scuffed (the place where the root of the nose links to the periorbital region looks really weird, I think that it has to do with the shading of that part.)
get references and try to simplify the face a little bit to make it less weird.

[Guts Fanart]

Not too bad ! It's rather sketchy / messy in terms of linework (especially the sword), but the potential is there, the upper right arm is way shorter than it should be, and the posing feels a bit stiff, feel free to check out references to improve with your stuff.
Keep it up !

[American McGee's Alice fanart]

Really really really good ! The face could use some work as it's pretty hard to differentiate it's features outside of the eyes. , the posing is ultra nice, same with the background.
You really stuck the landing with the lineless art. It kinda reminds me of a cult classifc 2000s flash tv show or something.

GoofballPaul responds:

Thank you! I'm very happy to hear that! ^0^
Now you mention it, yeah, the face is rather weak as well, compared to the rest... Thank you for the feedback! :D

[Serenity Illusion Form]

Nice line, not too fan of the rendering, it's way too mushy / soft, in my opinion, other than that and some anatomy stuff (that weird spike on where the waist and the abs joins together) it's pretty good.

[Cigarette break]

reminds me of an european / french comic book that nearly no one has read but quickly becomes a cult classic decades after it's done.

ElvenEyez responds:

very specific. i love that. thank you!

[Magical Assailant]

ooooo looks really really cool ! I like how they compliment each other in the pose.

LaxedNinja responds:

Thanks!

[OP girls]

Cool composition, the proportions are mad scuffed.

[Glam Rock Freddy, pixel]

nice coloring on it. Watch out though, he's missing a finger on the hand holding the pizza slice, and the other one has its pinkie broken (the palm should go over the finger and not the other way at this angle), feel free to use references to get it right.
Keep it up !

Coffeeshy responds:

Thank You :D

[A Dynamic Pose]

looks clean ! the anatomy on the torso / abs could use some work (the arch thing that looks like an upside down U doesn't wrap around correctly).
I really dig the face and the rendering on the clothes, keep it up !

[Diane Foxington - The Bad Guys]

Nice one, I dig the coloring, the perspective with the couch is a bit weird though.
Not a fan of the filter used, it's a bit too harsh imo

babykreamx1 responds:

Thanks for the feedback. I was thinking the same thing lol.