SireForseti's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Scunt Shorts]

big slappy

[EXE again - 2004]

reeks of it's time (positive)

[A.B.A]

The style of this one reminds me of a cross of KH and Daisuke Ishiwatari's art.
I fucking love it with all of my passion, i'm jealous at how good you're doing the line weight.

[my favorite cat]

GOES HARD

[Elmedain]

GOES HARD LETS GOOOOOO

[Hong Kong Ken]

I don't get the reference but, holy shit anime steven seagal

CZQ131 responds:

The name came from an in-joke with a friend but after I went down the Seagal rabbit hole I decided I needed an OC parodying the man named Hong Kong Ken. I really don't draw him enough and I think I still need to find the right balance of original design choices to make him distinct without losing the parody aspect. So far this is the best version.

[Squigly at the pool]

the anatomy is really really messed up here, she should be more in a curvy hourglass/ 8 shape instead of a V

Kommando-Kaijin responds:

Yeah, I accidentally rushed this and forgot to accidentally drew her with the anatomy rules I use for my OCs and not in an imitation of her official appearance. There's also the fact that I accidentally drew her 7 heads tall instead of the 4 her official design is, which again, is a mistake.

[R@NDAL!]

goes hard

[Pretty Blonde]

The shading doesn't make sense,the face is messed up (eyes way too close, the nose is wrongly shaped) I feel like you really need to work on your fundamentals (anatomy, proportions.)

Imani-Islander69 responds:

I agree with the shading comment, but the face is how i like to draw characters, and i trace over the pose with a reference.

[Other Mother]

Not too bad, the hand on her hip is off (mostly the fingers) I feel like the line work is a bit too thick, and some of it is wobbly where it shouldn't be (the hips and breasts mostly.)

MadConjurerDrawz responds:

Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, hands are still one of my banes even though I've been doing this for a minute and for the line work, yeah it is messy in a few spots, but for the thickness, I've always liked artwork that utilized bold outlines so I've tried to emulate that in mine. Trust me, I used to go way harder with the thickness and I've toned it down I feel.